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• Birthday: May 3, 1986
• Gender: Male
• Blog Traffic: 607 Visitors

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Recent Posts:

• Responsible Citizen of the Floating World 2 months ago
• Tower of Babel 2 months ago
• We are the Champions! 2 months ago
• At the Auction of the Ruby Slippers 2 months ago
• Life of Brian 2 months ago
• The Prophet's Hair 2 months ago

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petecoffman's Recent Comments

• Reply to blog post: Where do our frames come from? by Crashley
  Comment written 4 months ago

  Thought you had solid ideas. Next time more textual analysis would be helpful.

• Reply to blog post: Frames, Check. by BrianneOliphant
  Comment written 4 months ago

  Great intro, next time some textual analysis would make your argument stronger.

   

• Reply to blog post: Can You Ask Yourself "Why"? Bessie Cannot. by branzenbach
  Comment written 4 months ago

  I enjoyed reading your post. Not many people chose that topic. Your thoughts about "frameworks" as "filters" was interesting.

• Reply to blog post: Present Past Future by jmatteri
  Comment written 4 months ago

  Try using more textual support.

• Reply to blog post: Nostalgia in Moderation... by CB1185
  Comment written 4 months ago

  Make sure to check that your format is consistent. More textual support may also help.

• Reply to blog post: Will Ono Shift Again? by branzenbach
  Comment written 4 months ago

  Your blog was coherent and concise. You expressed your thoughts well. I enjoyed reading it.

   

• Reply to blog post: Burned Bridges by Knoxville
  Comment written 5 months ago

  Really like you intro. The whole New York/Sydney analogy worked. Your main paragraph was a little heavy... lots of quotes. Interesting take on the burned brigde idea. Way to take a stance.

  -pete

• Reply to blog post: The Bridge of Hesitation by Crashley
  Comment written 5 months ago

  Really thought the content is solid. However, a quick suggestion...try to break up the writting into more paragraphs. Give the reader some "white space." With no spacing all the text gets overwhelmming.

• Reply to blog post: The Price of Wisdom by BrianneOliphant
  Comment written 5 months ago

  Your comment on Ono sheltering himself with his memories is solid! Also good incorporation of quotes into your post.

  -Pete

• Reply to blog post: Getting to know DL.Ksenzuliakova by DL.Ksenzuliakova
  Comment written 5 months ago

  Hi DL,

    It's Peter, the guy who sat by you in the international forum lecture...fluent in Mandarin.  Not ringing any bells? The guy who was really funny/witty? Still no? Ouch. Hope your havin a good one. Just writing to say: what up. I will try to add you as a freind, don't shaft me.

  -Pete